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Post by magnum on Jun 20, 2008 13:06:08 GMT -5
The sun shines down upon the land, making grass glow and people smile. A man can be seen sitting in the shade of a apple tree. He has on a gray "Affliction" shirt and blue jeans. His head is slanted down, and his eyes are shut. The camera comes in on the man, looking into his sleeping face. The man suddenly opens his eyes, and his eyes reveal him as LOE's newest star, Matt Sydal. He looks in the camera, and smiles. He stretches out his arms.
Matt Sydal: "It's been a while, since I could say I felt good about myself. It's been a while, since I could say I have picked myself back up from a tough fall. It's pretty much been a while, since I have felt any emotion. I haven't wrestled a match, in over a year. Now, that may not seem like a very long time, but keep in mind, this.... is what I love to do. And those 365 plus days of not wrestling, might of well been 365 plus days with no food, water, and air. Soon, I make MY long awaited return to the ring.... and when I do, I will once again prove, that I am one of the most charismatic, athletic, and determined wrestlers, to EVER step foot... into a ring!"
Sydal gets up and walks away ending the scene.
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Miss Kammy
Jobber
What Kammy Wants Kammy Gets!
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Post by Miss Kammy on Jun 20, 2008 15:42:57 GMT -5
It was alright. The introduction and closing definitely need work, but I'm not really one who cares for either of those, as I like to just get to the point. I know this is just an introduction roleplay, but I'd expect to definitely see you step up your game when you get your first match. You should also work a bit on your grammar to tidy up the roleplay.
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