"Feelin' Luck, Punk?" - Sydal RP

[magnum]

We are taken back stage, to where Matt Sydal stands along side, Funaki.

Funkai:
“Allo, I is Land Of Extweem’s numba one announca, FUNAKI!!! I stand here with Matt Sydal, who takes on CM Punk tonight. Sydal, how you feel about CM Punk?”

Sydal pushes Funaki out of the frame.

Sydal:
“I got it from here.”

Sydal takes a breath in.

Sydal:
“Listen up, Punk. I don’t like your faggish little attitude one bit, and I am going to put an end to the Punk Era before it even starts and I am going to do it for all these fans.
Because frankly, I don’t find that any of theme enjoy you, just like me!”

The fans cheer and cheer for Sydal.

Sydal:
“That’s right, Punk, they love me and HATE YOU! Which will be why I WILL be victorious tonight.!!”

Sydal's music starts to play over the PA system and roar of the fans.

Sydal:
"You feelin' lucky, Punk? I sure hope not, cause the only way you can beat me is with luck! See ya out there!"

Screen fades to black.

[Johnny Magnum]

You aren't very good.
Even though you are probably gone, I am going to list the things bad.
1, the opening was horrid.
2, you act like a heel, when you are face.
3, you don't have enough description. People say that doesn't matter to often, but in this case... it does.
4, the line stealing from Dirty Harry was used really bad. Mostly because you got it wrong.
I come to the conclusion, that you sir, FAIL.

[Miss Kammy]

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That right there was a better roleplay than yours.

[Johnny Magnum]

Jun 23, 2008 12:12:41 GMT -5 Miss Kammy said:

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That right there was a better roleplay than yours.

7.5/10.
I saw a few errors..