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Post by Jack Swagger on Oct 21, 2008 0:37:19 GMT -5
Swagger: Hey! everybody its me jack swagger im here to tell you all soon me and gavin spears will soon win titles and no one will stand in our way!.
*jack swagger leaves*
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Post by Soulfire on Oct 21, 2008 15:35:55 GMT -5
......
That's it?
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Post by Soulfire on Oct 21, 2008 15:38:53 GMT -5
*Shakes head*
Uhh... Let's see, some grammar errors... It's.... Incredibly short..
Uhhh.... Great Sentence.....
1/5...
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Post by Santino Marella on Oct 21, 2008 16:46:22 GMT -5
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WTF, wow, when I first started r/ping, I at least did more than a sentence, pretty large. That is not an r/p, that is a sentence.
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Post by Antonio Chavez on Oct 21, 2008 17:48:46 GMT -5
-_-
what a let down.......
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Post by Johnny Magnum on Oct 21, 2008 17:55:49 GMT -5
tbh, even if Zak doesn't RP you shouldn't win..
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Post by The Roy on Oct 21, 2008 21:07:17 GMT -5
lol. Well one sentence is still better than no sentence. Maybe this guy has a reason for only doing one line. And from what I hear, this is his first ever RP.
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Post by Jack Swagger on Oct 22, 2008 6:16:55 GMT -5
let me just say
sry for only that ''sentance'' and whatever its better than nothing (like roy said) but cmon people after some time my rping will grow large
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Post by Cody Lewis on Oct 22, 2008 10:26:44 GMT -5
ROLEPLAY OF THE YEAR
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Post by Soulfire on Oct 22, 2008 15:53:53 GMT -5
let me just say sry for only that ''sentance'' and whatever its better than nothing (like roy said) but cmon people after some time my rping will grow large Sentance? Really? |
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Post by Johnny Magnum on Oct 22, 2008 18:00:26 GMT -5
lol. Well one sentence is still better than no sentence. Maybe this guy has a reason for only doing one line. And from what I hear, this is his first ever RP. Not really. And who the fuck cares if this is his first RP? Doesn't mean it's ok for it to be one sentence. You learn from reading other people's RPs, Jack, read other peoples RPs and get the general idea. Make opening description, dialog, more description, more dialog.... though, Tyger doesn't use much or any description in his RPs and he still wins titles.... |
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Post by Soulfire on Oct 22, 2008 18:01:22 GMT -5
lol. Well one sentence is still better than no sentence. Maybe this guy has a reason for only doing one line. And from what I hear, this is his first ever RP. Not really. And who the fuck cares if this is his first RP? Doesn't mean it's ok for it to be one sentence. You learn from reading other people's RPs, Jack, read other peoples RPs and get the general idea. Make opening description, dialog, more description, more dialog.... though, Tyger doesn't use much or any description in his RPs and he still wins titles.... cause I use words to describe it.... |
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